#47446 - Character development and how the characters acted in mundane situations or other problems non-sex-related happened, because that's how real life plays out. Beyond half-way through, it goes to shit, but the first half I imagine for a sex-centric story is written really well. Secondly, if this is so, how'd a few events as flimsy as discovering your brother whacking off (Hey there, Best Sister in The World), coming out of the pool with an erection (What's up, My Sis Is Irresistible) or finding a porno mag and suddenly being cool with experimenting until your cousin's freaking sister bursts in and is for some reason totally cool with the events and decides to join in (How's it going, 3 Cousins) manage to carry that much weight? If there's gonna be incest, at least make it make sense.